Improvement of nouns: The boxy window frames form the rungs of a cage. These rungs are more than large enough to admit an escape. yet the room retains its restrictive nature. The air is hot, as are the fumes of ideas ascending to form a cloud of thought.

Personification: I muster my will and leave the cosy warmth of the car with one push of the door, warranting a cloud of hot air to disperse immediately into the cold vacuum. Shifting my balance i first guide the car door, then let it find the rest of it’s way, ending in a happy closed state.